pcgumban | 
04 8th, 2009| 
Okay so I have been detailing vehicles for sometime now and never really actually had a real ad posted online. I have had alot of customers just never any repeat customers. So I have decided to start my mobile wash and detail service with a new kick. I am changing my service as an Eco Safe and Friendly service for your Car & RV for regular scheduled washing weekly and bi weekly services available.
My new Mobile Wash & Detail service is waterless, it is meant for new and well-maintained vehicles that are light to moderately dirty. I will use a spray on biodegradable solution that is friendly to the environment and helps conserve water during water restrictions.
Last night I was really tired and was online updating my written documents that i had written months ago. This was on myspace and I accidently erased everything oh was i fusterated, I then had to restart everything from scratch. I feel like it happened for a reason since like out of no where i wrote this idea out that in my mind sounds pretty cool, and I would seriously call right away for a discount like you will read soon. My question is after you read what i wrote please let me know if it makes sense, have i repeated myself more than once than than needed. Does it sound like a scam. Have you ever heard of anything like this,? I mean I honestly know there are contracted accounts with customers and they receive discounts but are they actually like what i listed. what I am offering, do you think that would bring me alot more business. I know i will be losing money but also on the flip side without the referrals I wouldn’t have what came my way in the first place so why not reward my future customers with the following,
When potential customers are reviewing my future ad after reading the introduction about my business they will be asked to Inquire by email about our discounted rate for your very first detail and wash.
Now when I wrote this last night out of bfe I figured hey if i could get people to email me about my discounted rates. Then I could send them an email back with this info
Thanks for inquiring about our repeat customer discounted rates.
We offer weekly or bi weekly dicounted car wash rates suited for your appointed needs.
If you’re interested in our discounted rate for $30.00 off your very first scheduled detail we only ask that you sign a contract to become one of our repeat satisfied customers. Not only will you receive $30.00 off your very first detail, on top of that you will receive $15.00 off the innitial car/rv wash rate for each and every wash scheduled afterwards. Note: With any extra services added to the detail we subtract $30.00 off the final price.
Now if you’re interested in becoming one of our repeat satisfied customers, we only ask that you schedule your first wash at the innitial car wash rate. If you like our service we will then have you sign a contract for our weekly or bi weekly scheduled wash service. Automatically you will receive a $15.00 off discounted rate for each scheduled wash. Our contracts last up to one month, so no need to feel that our contract is long term. If you wish to keep the contract we will then renew it with the same offer with one added bonus a free car wash every end of the month, good towards your next scheduled wash. Then automatically your $15.00 discounted rate repeats until the next month comes around and you get the same offer when you renew.
We also offer a $0.00 innitial cost good towards your first wash including all your other washes whether it be weekly or bi weekly The terms are when we come to your location all we ask is that you invite anyone you think may be interested in our weekly or bi weekly services. We will do a short demonstration on your vehicle once we sign a contract with 2 or more of your friends, family etc. We then will not expect a dime out of you ever. The only catch is if they no longer need our services then you have 30 days to find a replacement for each party. This only applies if you only got 2 people signed with us all together. If you have 3 or more still with us even after we lost two contract accounts, then your still getting our free service.
The wash process works out like this when we are at your location for your scheduled first wash we expect there to be at least 2 or more cars there for us to wash. If they want a detail we will have to schedule with them at there location on another scheduled date. Since this is only for car/rv washing only. After we wash their cars we will then park them side by side with the key in their door letting our potential new customers know their vehicle is now ready. Our service accepts cash or checks payable to
Same thing with anyone you referred, they are eligible for the same service we are offering you. Of course when we start an agreement with them we will then start scheduling our wash service at their location instead of your location and even though they are no longer o
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